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Have you ever created your own poem? If you have, what is it about? Well for writing this week, we have been working on poetry.
Our teachers showed us a few videos of people reading their poems and gave us some poems that were written by Pie Corbett and Valerie Bloom, who are both very good poets. Anyway, today we had to create our own poem, and I called my one 'Cake'. It would be amazing if you could leave some feedback on my poem, thanks!
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There’s cake there’s cake,
It’s everywhere,
All sorts of toppings in my hair,
I can’t decide which one to eat,
My tummys full, oh what a treat!
I dance around, with delight,
I really want another bite
It’s time for lunch,
Oh I can’t wait,
I go to the kitchen and get a plate.
It’s calling me, it’s calling me,
What’s for lunch?
I want to see,
Is it roast chicken?
Or fish soup?
Sandwiches?
A Cantaloupe?
Oh wait, no way!
It’s cake, no fake
I wish we had this everyday!
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