Today we were supposed to finish of this paragraph describing what it was like outside.
Acidic rain fell for three days and three nights. When the rain fell, I stayed inside with friends and family. When it stopped, however, my family and I decided to go for a walk outside. I opened the door and...
the only things remaining are just rotten wood, dead plants and a dessert for a garden. The place was so messed up, that it looked as if a drought and a tornado had just passed.
Tree branches were scattered across the yard and there was a big chunk of rotten wood from a nearby tree that was blocking the driveway. I thought that nothing could have gotten worse until I saw a tree trunk, smashed into my dog's kennel, the rain must have weakened the trees roots causing it to fall.
I fell to my knees and burst into tears. I could even hear a distant bark from him, and another, and another each time getting louder, I got up and started looking for him, he seemed to be in the bushes, I made my way through hoping it was him and... It was!
I jumped around joyfully, not even caring about the acid rain storm because he was here! I ran to my Mum and Dad with tears of joy in my eyes telling them what had happened and how I was so gutted when I saw the tree trunk in His kennel, and how I found him in the bushes. I was so happy that I totally forgot about what the rain did for a while.
And then I woke up to a beautiful day with the sun shining. Oh how grateful was that it was just a dream.
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Hi Sam,
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative story you have written about what you would do if you walked outside after an acid rain storm.
I am so glad that your dog was OK in the end of the story! I was worried there for a minute, stories with happy endings are the best!
Do you have a dog at home?
Until next time, happy blogging :)
HI Emma,
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading my post and replying. Actually, I don't have a dog at home, But I have a Cat. I thought that it would sound weird if I said that my cat had a kennel outside, and I also said that I had a dog because It was a Fictional story, Right?
Sam